Party invite i made your views needed :)

edited October 2007 in creations
well i made a party invite for a party we will have next week, you won't understand it since it's in hebrew but i could use some help regarding colors and styling.

just FYI the topmost lines say: a beastly (the word with the teeth and eyes) party for the opening of the new school year by the life science students.
That is completely a remake of the phrase so it fits in english but it sounds much better in hebrew.

so please tell me if you think something should be added, changed, etc.

Tnx

TEU

Comments

  • edited 7:08AM
    looks weird :D
  • edited 7:08AM
    yeah, you'll likely want to change that background, have less type effects and colours, and use a grid :)
  • edited 7:08AM
    fixed the grid, darkened the background to look more lifelike and removed the style from the greenish row to black like the date row
  • edited 7:08AM
    tried a different approach

    what do you think?
  • edited October 2007
    use plain yellow paper. no background design. switch from red to orange for the "monster" text.

    unbolden the black text. make the small black text smaller. close up the vertical spacing on the black text just above the map.

    don't drink too much
    use a condom
    wear a helmet

    :)
  • edited 7:08AM
    mick:
    don't drink too much
    use a condom
    wear a helmet
    ... and don't forget to pay afterwards! :))
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